Services of Love
Erstellt: 25.08.2007
Letzte Änderung: 25.08.2007
Letzte Änderung: 25.08.2007
abgeschlossen
Englisch
941 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
941 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: Lady Oscar
For the orphaned, there is only one thing left to do. Post-Series. Character Death. Not Happy.
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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Kapitel 1 | E: 25.08.2007 U: 25.08.2007 |
Kommentare (3) 945 Wörter abgeschlossen |
Von: abgemeldet
2015-04-30T21:18:46+00:00
30.04.2015 23:18
What a great story; heart touching with all of these deep emotions. I love this depressive athmosphere, too. The words you let him said are so full of sadness. Your idea, that he have thought like this after hearing about the death of his beloved daughter - its very authentic. I love your story and your kind of farewell for him. Grest work!
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Von: abgemeldet
2008-06-11T16:04:44+00:00
11.06.2008 18:04
Ich kann zwar nicht wirklch Englich, aber das was ich dank der Bablefish Übersetzung verstanden habe, ist echt traurig.
Eine traurige aber wundbar erzähle Kurzgeschichte!
Eine traurige aber wundbar erzähle Kurzgeschichte!
Kommentar zu: Kapitel 1:
Von: abgemeldet
2007-08-26T21:36:59+00:00
26.08.2007 23:36
You are creating quite a depressing atmosphere in this fanfiction and you are describing it so well that the reader can almost touch it! I myself can very well imagine that this could be the way the general would've reacted upon hearing of Oscar's death. Very well written, keep up the good work! :-)
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