Fanfiction.net Beschreibung:
Mikey had a weird nightmare and seeks comfort by one of his brothers. And Raphael didn't think it would be him. He may not be the best choice and Mikey should know that. Dealing with peoples feeling isn't exactly his strong point, especially not in the middle of night. But Splinter isn't too concerned about it.
The cracking Sound
Erstellt: 24.11.2012
Letzte Änderung: 30.12.2012
Letzte Änderung: 30.12.2012
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Englisch
3842 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
3842 Wörter, 1 Kapitel
Thema: Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles
Hauptcharaktere: Michelangelo, Raphael
Kapitel | Datum | Andere Formate | Daten |
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Kapitel 1 The cracking Sound | E: 30.12.2012 U: 30.12.2012 |
Kommentare (0) 3802 Wörter abgeschlossen |
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Michelangelo
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Raphael
Nice one you got there :) I love it when it`s about Raphs "soft side". And the idea with the dream was great. I think I was able to imagine it perfectly :D Waiting for your next one
Geetz
Kori
Geetz
Kori
Von: abgemeldet
2013-07-23T08:53:51+00:00
23.07.2013 10:53
Nice one!! I really enjoy it <3 i like how you wrote it- the characters, the feelings and actings ^^ really good. There must be more (good) comments here...
Well.. thumbs up! :D
Well.. thumbs up! :D